I
read an excerpt of this in Wired magazine and was intrigued. It helped that the
authors are Admiral
James Stavridis and Marine veteran
Elliot Ackerman.
While patrolling the South China Sea, a small flotilla makes a surprising discovery
after coming to the aid of a fishing trawler in distress. Over in the Persian Gulf,
a test of new stealth technology mounted on an F-35 goes awry. A cyberattack upon
D.C. briefly knocks out the power at the White House. Events spiral out of
control from there.
The premise that makes this all possible is a technological leap made by
China, granting them superior cyberespionage skills, strong enough to
incapacitate the American military. Given the lack of cybersecurity
infrastructure and the growing prevalence of ransomware attacks
plaguing America over the last few years, it does at least seem plausible.
But there are other assumptions that take away from the scenario presented.
Iran is struggling too much right now to suddenly become a successful
expansionist state. As much as I'd like India to succeed as a nation, the
authors envision it making leaps and bounds in infrastructure and military
strength in too short a time, particularly for a country that has issues
providing sufficient potable water to its cities. NATO is notably absent,
albeit still intact. The impact of Covid-19 on the world seems to be largely
ignored, granted the manuscript was probably at the publisher.
The story is told from the viewpoint of five characters: US Navy Commodore Sarah
Hunt, Chinese Admiral Lin Bao, US Marine pilot Major Chris "Wedge" Mitchell,
Iranian Brigadier General Qassem Farshad, and US Deputy National Security Advisor
Sandeep Chowdhury. The authors provide them with enough backstory to have a sense
of who they are, but there was never quite enough for them to leap off the page.
They were like made-for-TV characters—functional but not memorable.
I think a major reason for that is, with maybe with one or two exceptions, that
most of the action and decision-making takes place off-screen. We get a character's
perspective just before something happens and then switch to a different character's
viewpoint as they react to the news of the event that just took place. End result:
All telling and very little showing. That's a major mistake.
This is no military thriller—Tom Clancy will not be dethroned here. This is
meant to be a cautionary tale, a war game scenario turned into a novel. While a
U.S. - China confrontation over the South China Sea or Taiwan is always a
possibility, particularly if jingoistic factions take control, it seemed as
though everyone made the wrong choice whenever possible. While the characters were
mere pawns, hubris seems to be a large part of the decision makers' choices.
A lesson in Pride goeth before the fall. Maybe that was the authors' intent
as the novel was written during the Trump administration. But whatever their reasons,
it just didn't work for me as a novel.
2 1/2 stars.
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